Friday 30 June 2017

MY SPEECH REFLECTION

My Speech Reflection😊
On Thursday the 29th, I had to share my  Speech in front of the hole class it was a bit weird at first but after I read a few lines I started to get a bit comfortable reading it in front of the class. 


*What was Good about my Speech? 
 The thing I thought was good in my Speech was the Hamburger when it said if WE don't look after our bees then that's the burger gone and I thought it was a good example for everyone because everyone (Maybe) Everyone loves Hamburgers and it was a warning to everyone that if we don't look after our bees then that's the burger gone.
*What was Bad
The thing I found out that was bad was
. Using eye contact with the people I was reading to.
. Engaging  the audience with Question's and more interesting things.
What was interesting about my Speech?
 The interesting bit about my Speech was that I thought I was reading Really Loud and  Confident but actually I was reading really Quiet and Lowish.












Thursday 15 June 2017

THE TAKEOVER

😊THE TAKEOVER😊
I  feel the wind push tenderly  against the grassy trees allowing them to sway side to side.  I can feel the sharp pain of the rocks stab  at the  bottom of my feet.  I  hear the birds play a sweet  harmony as the sweep gracefully in the wind leaving me  alone in the bush. I give a sigh of relief. As I do I breathe in the fresh air.  I am standing there breathless with amazement.    When I stop staring for about 10 or 20 seconds Caitlin  strolls up to me,I stare at her like nothing happened.  "Did you see that?" I questioned in astonishment. "See what?" she asked screwing up her face. (In a questionable way)  "That thing that I just saw??" " What was it" Caitlin said "Be specific" I just stood  there looking at here, I was surprised she hadn't seen a thing. So to get the conversation over and done with I just said, "Lets go back to class" I said with a slight grin looking straight at her. "Okaaaaay" she replied with a squeaky tiny voice. So we trotted back to class. THE END